Tuesday 2 October 2007

constructive critisisms

Thank you to everyone who has given me their constructive comments on my homework. I have made some changes but rather than posting the new version on here..........I don't really want two versions of the same story on the same page I shall post it over on Kindred. Perhaps at a later stage I shall create a new blog altogether for my stories.

2 comments:

Fat Controller said...

My comment on 'kindred' got bounced back for some reason, so I'll repeat it here: I´m there. I can see the scene in front of me. I can feel Fins´
hopelessness and heartache. What more can I say?

Fat Controller said...

P.S. Perhaps one day we too could take a drink at The Rising Sun, or The White Horse at Droxford, or my old favourite, The Flower Pots at Cheriton